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 Post Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:16 pm 
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Toward the end of the first paragraph of "The Dead Gods: The First Age - The Golden Age", the sentence:
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Any human born of Peran’s decent received much Grin and Radiant power.


should be:

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Any human born of Peran’s decent received much Grim and Radiant power.


Underline not included, of course.


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 Post Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:25 pm 
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Ah, and two sentences later:
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All the Reflected worlds were strangely connected, and as the majority went,
The word "worlds" needs to be capitalized.


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 Post Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2011 7:15 pm 
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Lonfer wrote:
Any human born of Peran’s descent received much Grim and Radiant power.


What about the word descent? Or lineage could be substituted. Sorry to nitpick.

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 Post Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 7:01 am 
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oops! :oops:

Corrections made, thanks for letting us know!!

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 Post Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 9:49 am 
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This section is in the Third age, just before the Rise of the Enchantress:

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No longer could humans unite to defeat the Demon Hoards.


The above underlined is a typo of Hordes. (Somehow I would find a fight to defeat a treasure cache anti-climatic ;) )

This next section is from the Creation of the Tyven, the last line before the Building of Morphael's Fortress section:
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In time their society branched out into more than the spies they had been bred to be, and casts emerged, like: warrior, mage and others.


The correct word is castes.

Excellent lore. Re-reading it has brought up questions, however. I will post them where appropriate.

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 Post Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 4:03 pm 
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Thanks for the help!!

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players may uses up this potential

In the characters section of the knowledge base, 3rd line under crafting.

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 Post Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2013 9:11 pm 
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ShadowOfTheAlphaUhm wrote:
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players may uses up this potential

In the characters section of the knowledge base, 3rd line under crafting.


shouldn't it be
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players may use up this potential

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